- Why Worry: I think I might need one or two more reasons to add to this section to make a
better connection to my audience, and would definitely make my point more clear. I have not
identified any experts. I haven't used any statistics and there are no words that need to be
defined.
- How Did They Become Endangered: Adding a few more details to this section will make it
stronger. I haven't introduced any experts. I do have some statistics and no terms really need
to be defined.
- How Can They Be Saved: This section needs to be extended more there are too little ideas
and not enough explanation.
- What Can You Do to Help and Conclusion seem fine.
Questions:
- Topic Sentence: Why worry section needs one as well as How did they become endangered.
- No lists provided
Visuals:
- Yes i offer captions related to my topic
- I have not explained the photos in the text at all.
- I have not discussed the significance to my main point
Structure:
- Don't have any anchor texts
Also want to add somewhere the escape of the animals in Ohio the past year, and still need to add my field research. This will add to my word count and give me more places to add anchor texts.
